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i am raw;
waiting for the skillet
kiss

me though the windmill
be careful not to
miss

me through the windmill
paint on me, a target:
erase
paint on me,
a smiling face

i am burnt;
waiting for the sunset
kiss

me through the windmill
be very careful not to
miss

me through the windmill
lips like morphine
words flow like ipecac
until you come back

lips like morphine
wordless chatter
against your scattered
anatomy

love is a windmill
for this reason, i slow our blades
let us
cultivate
swilly
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012   General Artist
My heart skipped a beat a ever repetition :heart:
Congratulations on the DLD, darling soul. :clap:
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xlntwtch Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012   Writer
I'd certainly read any work you put here. Mind a :+devwatch:? ... :+fav:

This is a piece that leaves me near speechless with admiration, and of course "Congratulations" on your DLD.
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
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Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.
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queenofrelax Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010
i love the flow on this ...
the way each stanza melts into the other and though it's romantic
it's so very eerie and it all just corresponds and this comment is very
run-on and pointless but just thought i should say that i like this (:
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RunningBear5858 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This is absolutely stunning. :D
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EatingMyOwnFears Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
wonderfully passionate! :heart:
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rime-n-rezon Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
Beautiful. All I have to say. :clap:
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xxtechnoxluvxx Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2010
Ahh, i love the formats of all your writings. It's all just so creative! ♥
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WillSchenck Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2010
ahh(:
thanks so much :heart:
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xxtechnoxluvxx Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010
You're very welcome :aww:
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