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i am raw;
waiting for the skillet
kiss

me though the windmill
be careful not to
miss

me through the windmill
paint on me, a target:
erase
paint on me,
a smiling face

i am burnt;
waiting for the sunset
kiss

me through the windmill
be very careful not to
miss

me through the windmill
lips like morphine
words flow like ipecac
until you come back

lips like morphine
wordless chatter
against your scattered
anatomy

love is a windmill
for this reason, i slow our blades
let us
cultivate
swilly
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Dec 28, 2012   General Artist
My heart skipped a beat a ever repetition :heart:
Congratulations on the DLD, darling soul. :clap:
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:iconxlntwtch:
I'd certainly read any work you put here. Mind a :+devwatch:? ... :+fav:

This is a piece that leaves me near speechless with admiration, and of course "Congratulations" on your DLD.
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:iconqueenofrelax:
i love the flow on this ...
the way each stanza melts into the other and though it's romantic
it's so very eerie and it all just corresponds and this comment is very
run-on and pointless but just thought i should say that i like this (:
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:iconrunningbear5858:
RunningBear5858 Jun 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This is absolutely stunning. :D
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:iconeatingmyownfears:
wonderfully passionate! :heart:
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:iconrime-n-rezon:
Beautiful. All I have to say. :clap:
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:iconxxtechnoxluvxx:
Ahh, i love the formats of all your writings. It's all just so creative! ♥
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:iconwillschenck:
ahh(:
thanks so much :heart:
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:iconxxtechnoxluvxx:
You're very welcome :aww:
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