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i am raw;
waiting for the skillet
kiss

me though the windmill
be careful not to
miss

me through the windmill
paint on me, a target:
erase
paint on me,
a smiling face

i am burnt;
waiting for the sunset
kiss

me through the windmill
be very careful not to
miss

me through the windmill
lips like morphine
words flow like ipecac
until you come back

lips like morphine
wordless chatter
against your scattered
anatomy

love is a windmill
for this reason, i slow our blades
let us
cultivate
swilly
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012   General Artist
My heart skipped a beat a ever repetition :heart:
Congratulations on the DLD, darling soul. :clap:
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xlntwtch Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012   Writer
I'd certainly read any work you put here. Mind a :+devwatch:? ... :+fav:

This is a piece that leaves me near speechless with admiration, and of course "Congratulations" on your DLD.
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here [link]
Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.
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queenofrelax Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010
i love the flow on this ...
the way each stanza melts into the other and though it's romantic
it's so very eerie and it all just corresponds and this comment is very
run-on and pointless but just thought i should say that i like this (:
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RunningBear5858 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This is absolutely stunning. :D
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EatingMyOwnFears Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
wonderfully passionate! :heart:
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rime-n-rezon Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
Beautiful. All I have to say. :clap:
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xxtechnoxluvxx Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2010
Ahh, i love the formats of all your writings. It's all just so creative! ♥
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WillSchenck Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2010
ahh(:
thanks so much :heart:
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xxtechnoxluvxx Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010
You're very welcome :aww:
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dancebutterfly20 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010
charming, the flow is easy and beautiful :)
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WillSchenck Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010
awh(:
thanks so much
:heart:
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UnholyConfessionsx3 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010  Student General Artist
Oh my god I'm so happy you finally posted some more I love your writing so much. You really should post more often :)
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WillSchenck Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010
haha(: good to hear that i've been missed.
i plan to.
i've got a lot to say, and poetry will help me so much in saying it.

thanks again
:heart:
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UnholyConfessionsx3 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2010  Student General Artist
Mkay I look forward to reading your work :)
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WillSchenck Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2010
(:
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SweetBlackRose13 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, the rhythm. :heart:
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WillSchenck Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010
awh(:
thanks
:heart:
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TerribleRosey Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
This was a pleasure to read.
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:iconwillschenck:
WillSchenck Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
ah, thanks so much!

:heart:
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totallyahmazing Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
I absolutely lovelovelove the flow of this.
Completely and utterly amazing, as are all of your works.
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WillSchenck Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
ah that's so much(:
the continued support is very much appreciated.

how'd the english project turn out?
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totallyahmazing Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
no problem, i enjoy supporting amazing writers (:

haha, well... i actually ended up dropping out of that school, sooo that was a no-go :x
however, on the plus side, i turned a lot of my friends onto your work. everyone was simply enchanted by your work!
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WillSchenck Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010
ahaa, well that's great!
thanx you(:
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Satah Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
rahh, i felt like i was falling into this! as i read, i slowly leaned forward, and didn't even notice until i shivered out of it at the end. what i'm trying to say, i think, is: AMAZING rhythm, i love love love it.
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WillSchenck Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
thanks so much.
a lot of my work is very rhythm based, so it's good to get some recognition for that(:
i respect you as an artist very much, it means a lot!
thanks again.
:heart:
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Satah Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
yeahh, i can see that from your gallery (: i admire that; i often fumble with rhythm and rhyming and the like.

thank you so much!
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tina-go-lightly Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010   Writer
I like this...I love how the stanzas carry over.
Good work :)
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WillSchenck Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
haha, tricky, isn't it?
thanks so much :heart:
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